Thank you for your interest in Dead Weight! Your personality and sample sections both show a thorough understanding of the character, but his powers section leave him more overpowered than we would like for the game's setting.
Compulsion and dream manipulation, as you said, will be inconsistent, but victims cannot be commanded to do anything more than turn their head to the side and only small things in the victim's dream background will change.
In regards to healing, minor cuts and bruise will heal faster than average (i.e. a couple of days), but they won't heal as soon as the injuries are inflicted. Broken bones will take about four weeks to heal, as opposed to six or longer.
His magic ring will be reduced to an ordinary piece of jewelry, but Damon will already be granted immunity to sunlight upon being pulled into the real world.
REVISION REQUEST
Compulsion and dream manipulation, as you said, will be inconsistent, but victims cannot be commanded to do anything more than turn their head to the side and only small things in the victim's dream background will change.
In regards to healing, minor cuts and bruise will heal faster than average (i.e. a couple of days), but they won't heal as soon as the injuries are inflicted. Broken bones will take about four weeks to heal, as opposed to six or longer.
His magic ring will be reduced to an ordinary piece of jewelry, but Damon will already be granted immunity to sunlight upon being pulled into the real world.
Would this be acceptable?